tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010475850020053525.post5448718206196012533..comments2024-03-23T09:22:57.541-05:00Comments on The Cave: The Cave Undercard 13: Bird Boy vs. MoneymakerAlexMiller72http://www.blogger.com/profile/04342817979573894992noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010475850020053525.post-88827074611783772382016-10-05T20:47:51.993-05:002016-10-05T20:47:51.993-05:00Good luck!Good luck!AlexMiller72https://www.blogger.com/profile/04342817979573894992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010475850020053525.post-44639471330877998562016-10-04T20:57:13.970-05:002016-10-04T20:57:13.970-05:00Once I can lock down a story idea I might give it ...Once I can lock down a story idea I might give it a shot! I've been wanting to commission you again too but can't think of a solid story the only thing i have certain is which models i want to use for the story haha. But if I do end up writing one you will be there first person I'll send it too since I love feedback and I learn alot from just reading your stories and could learn even more from feedback!Axelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06087156092479836061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010475850020053525.post-53541771683573900572016-10-03T18:53:36.310-05:002016-10-03T18:53:36.310-05:00You should write something if you're motivated...You should write something if you're motivated. If you do, I'd love to read it.AlexMiller72https://www.blogger.com/profile/04342817979573894992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010475850020053525.post-79973250671639787192016-10-03T14:11:19.996-05:002016-10-03T14:11:19.996-05:00There is a lot...and I'm reading other comment...There is a lot...and I'm reading other commenters and they saw stuff that I didn't even touch on my comment! HA! It was good Alex. It was great.I love reading what other guys think. Sometimes they catch stuff that I miss...Fricks Sexy Pickshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16553340410459316728noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010475850020053525.post-68836492692347209982016-10-03T13:11:14.658-05:002016-10-03T13:11:14.658-05:00And it still amazes me at how well you do it! Ever...And it still amazes me at how well you do it! Every one had good parts even with cody and ryan not involved with the action. You even find new ways to suprise us with each match. You are a talented writer alrx makes me want to sit down and write some matches!Axelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06087156092479836061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010475850020053525.post-5175847352047172082016-10-02T20:37:31.196-05:002016-10-02T20:37:31.196-05:00You are welcome, Axel. I love all kinds of comment...You are welcome, Axel. I love all kinds of comments, but the length of some of these tell me that this one really worked out. As I said above, I really wanted to give all five characters - Xaq, Moneymaker, Valet, Ryan and Cody - some development.<br /><br />I think I'll leave the tease as a tease. ;)AlexMiller72https://www.blogger.com/profile/04342817979573894992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010475850020053525.post-64728097530099096512016-10-02T20:00:19.853-05:002016-10-02T20:00:19.853-05:00Yes! I've been waiting for this match up and t...Yes! I've been waiting for this match up and to see how things turned out it was a perfect match Alex! I love 2v1 matches as you probably know so this is going straight to the top of my favorites list haha. The banter in this chapter was great too. Alot of people above noticed that too and im glad to hear that Valet is getting more attention in 2017 cause he deserves it! MM talking down to Birdboy taunting him and saying that he didnt even deserve his cock was so hot! I bet it took a hit to Xaq's pride but good thing the jobber has alot of it so it wont shake him up at all haha. One of my favorite endings how they toy with BB and shoot over his face coating him from chest up. Im glad cody came in time though to save BB's hair! Cody was too funny at the end, more concerned that he looks bad with how his sidekick jobbed but ryan quickly helped him realize the bright side in the end. And then the cliff hanger... Damn im too curious at what ryan was hinting at. This match is the 'doomsday' match right? or is that next month. I wonder if what other people thought of Jae using another hero/villain/costume is something that could be true. Guess well have to see in 2 weeks cant wait!<br /><br /> As always Thanks Alex!Axelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06087156092479836061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010475850020053525.post-39504802789667042872016-10-02T11:36:21.297-05:002016-10-02T11:36:21.297-05:00Thanks, Sharlin!Thanks, Sharlin!AlexMiller72https://www.blogger.com/profile/04342817979573894992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010475850020053525.post-71560779920466969992016-10-02T11:28:21.576-05:002016-10-02T11:28:21.576-05:00Dear lord this was HOT! I could picture the holds...Dear lord this was HOT! I could picture the holds, the cries, the sweat, magnificent!Sharlinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08121128011293042206noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010475850020053525.post-89038918161363341412016-10-02T11:07:50.349-05:002016-10-02T11:07:50.349-05:00Thanks! I always appreciate hearing my characters ...Thanks! I always appreciate hearing my characters feel real and that the story arcs are interesting. My philosophy is that there are only so many archetypes, holds and stakes, so it's the characters that can keep the blog going.<br /><br />And I do like the idea of a hero being milked, so I'm happy to hear others do, too.AlexMiller72https://www.blogger.com/profile/04342817979573894992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010475850020053525.post-67848707936816437642016-10-02T09:09:15.960-05:002016-10-02T09:09:15.960-05:00Fantastic story! Your ability to really develop th...Fantastic story! Your ability to really develop three dimensional characters and have actual story arc is astounding. And I really like how at the end, as part of his erotic torture you had Valet forcibly milk BirdBoy- getting fucked is so passive, being forced to cum by someone against your will is much more humiliating, your own body betraying you. :)<br /><br />lowblow2myspeedohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11464279924096766058noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010475850020053525.post-12653120003543756022016-10-02T09:04:58.751-05:002016-10-02T09:04:58.751-05:00Thanks, Phil!
Sometimes my stories are more about...Thanks, Phil!<br /><br />Sometimes my stories are more about one characters, but with this one, I tried to give everyone a good showing. It seems like it worked, so I like hearing that.AlexMiller72https://www.blogger.com/profile/04342817979573894992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010475850020053525.post-30880721176314217562016-10-02T07:55:40.929-05:002016-10-02T07:55:40.929-05:00This was great fun! I love Bird Boy and you used h...This was great fun! I love Bird Boy and you used him perfectly, who doesn't love a good sidekick who needs to be rescued? I'm also a fan of Moneymaker using the clippers as his calling card, I'm a sucker for hair matches. But perhaps the most intriguing bit was the hint at Jae's next match... are we getting villain Jae? Philhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07252704484608420840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010475850020053525.post-9893996376690401082016-10-02T06:22:12.899-05:002016-10-02T06:22:12.899-05:00Wow, thanks for the comment. There's so much h...Wow, thanks for the comment. There's so much here. I really appreciate your passion for the story and characters. Knowing that guys see the characters as people is the best compliment.<br /><br />Xaq is fun to write, so I'm glad he's fun to read. Valet is a slow build character, but the reaction makes me happy I've planned more development for him next year. And Moneymaker is a force to be reckoned with. His breakup with Night was emotional for him, but losing big to The Bat was the best thing for him to get him focused again.AlexMiller72https://www.blogger.com/profile/04342817979573894992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010475850020053525.post-68626463376746807452016-10-01T18:05:01.705-05:002016-10-01T18:05:01.705-05:00This was a delicious match. Perhaps its a differen...This was a delicious match. Perhaps its a different adjective, but its just so rich. It has many things that you can feel, and visualize. You can visualize easily the two muscle characters in the ring, battling. At least for me it was clearer than ever before. The action, the movements, the descriptions of their bodies, uff it was damn exciting and hot. And I'm just describing the writing. It was so easy to picture the action in the match, even their facial expressions and the ATTITUDES! XAQ again was written brilliantly, but then MoneyMaker, Valet and Ryan also were written. Ryan begins the match with the cystal clear concept "The sheer amount of muscle and arrogance in the ring is overwhelming." Perfectly captured. At the same time though...its more than overwhelming its just Awesome! I will also say that XAQ's one liners are just superb, like a fellow commenter said above. He is just ans awesome character. He makes me laugh every single time. But this match was so different. It was hard. I could see MM slamming XAQ's back on the Apron and the strong muscular body just getting pushed past his limits. Or MM barely able to walk from the punishment he received. Or the two hot bodies in a heap together in the ring. HOT HOT HOT. Valet was also written perfectly. He intervened but its doubtful the outcome would have been different with our without him. But he was so playful and just sheer fun! Spanking the ass, and doing the small things that he knew that would get BB unfocused! Still MM was jjust a bit too much for BB. WOW. MM was really good in this match. He had planned on weakening BB's back and executed perfectly. In the muscle vs muscle match, he won. I think he just has to improve a bit more to really get back in the same level as The BAt. Even though XAQ performed so much better, he still demonstrates his weaknesses. But I can really criticize him. Yeah he pulled another stunt...but would he be XAQ without doing stuff like that? LOVE HIM. JUST LOVE XAQ.<br />And now the stakes. WOWOWOWOW.That could be a separate comment. HA! WOWOWOW. Talk about stakes and humiliation and revenge and power. The VALET just elevated his stature in my mind a few notches. Clearly, BB is really going to have a grudge with VALET. These two have to have a one on one. I cant see XAQ taking this easily, even after the ending. He was paraded and played with like muscle boy...BY THE VALET! HA! Great Job. The fact that MM didn't think he was worth it...completes the humiliation. <br />And the ending. Surprisng to say the least. Awesome. The rescue, XAQ pulling a fast one..again, but the BAT laying down the law, hard on his sidekick. I wonder what happened in those twenty minutes. I wonder how CODY will train XAQ in order to get him to stay in line. That should be interesting. <br />MM and Valet...shined. They got kicked in the ass at the end but its irrelevant in how I see them. They were good. In every way. They were more than good. I hope to see them again soon. MM, Valet, and XAQ really kicked ass in this story. All three got pushed up to a new level. MM now needs a tougher challenge. Top tier. BB well his depends on The Bat. He controls him. And Valet...that...that is just very interesting...Fricks Sexy Pickshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16553340410459316728noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010475850020053525.post-23871135285899746412016-10-01T17:23:29.989-05:002016-10-01T17:23:29.989-05:00Awesome! I really appreciate the comment.
Xaq may...Awesome! I really appreciate the comment.<br /><br />Xaq may be learning. I guess we'll see how much and how fast. Cody definitely has more work to do with his sidekick, so no worries there. And I'm happy to read that Valet is attracting interest.<br /><br />As for Jae, I can't get anything past you, Sean! Good news is that 10/15 is the next Adventures of SuperStar story where you'll see the match Ryan is referring to.AlexMiller72https://www.blogger.com/profile/04342817979573894992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010475850020053525.post-28019522018932500822016-10-01T16:01:30.111-05:002016-10-01T16:01:30.111-05:00I loved this so much, I don't know where to st...I loved this so much, I don't know where to start. So I'll start with the funniest part:<br /><br />"It's muscular, not fat!"<br /><br />Oh Xaq. Focus, boy, focus. (Although, through the ring action, you COULD see that Xaq WAS more focused than he USED to be. Subtle in-ring improvements, letting himself get a LITTLE less distracted, character growth, I love it.) It was neat being from Ryan's point of view, too. Usually Xaq stories are from Cody's POV, and Cody always seems to think Ryan has a soft spot for Xaq, but now we see Ryan is only too willing to stand back and let Xaq learn his lessons. Tough but fair.<br /><br />Like others, I was surprisingly interested in Valet. The dedication, the loyalty. The hotness of a smaller guy willing to get in there and mix it up, and play dirty to counter the size disadvantage. And what it says about Moneymaker: Stepping out "on his own" after being in a tag team, but still making sure to have an advantage in the numbers game.<br /><br />Cody's always funny, especially when seen through Ryan's eyes. I AM glad he kept his boy, though!<br /><br />And poor Xaq...such a hot loss. (It was getting a little "Jason Todd"-ish, only this time, the Bat showed up in time, yay!)<br /><br />I'm interested in what happens next to ALL the characters in today's story, AND I'm interested in the foreshadowing for the future (Is Jae going to appear as someone other than SuperStar...?), so all in all, this story was a success on every count!Sean Pfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12786697550800390787noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010475850020053525.post-53620615658014997552016-10-01T10:12:56.932-05:002016-10-01T10:12:56.932-05:00Thanks, Mike! Glad this delivered for a big Xaq fa...Thanks, Mike! Glad this delivered for a big Xaq fan. I will tease that everyone will get a little more insight into how Xaq's mind works coming 12/15.<br /><br />You're right. Cody is many things, but idiot is never one of them. And Valet will be coming into his own even more in 2017.AlexMiller72https://www.blogger.com/profile/04342817979573894992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010475850020053525.post-22577673989970948812016-10-01T10:07:38.487-05:002016-10-01T10:07:38.487-05:00Thanks! Xaq has a lot more journey ahead of him. H...Thanks! Xaq has a lot more journey ahead of him. He has really become a staple in The Cave, so I view him as the top of the second tier with Beau. In fact, thanks to a reader commission, you might find him moving up even higher in the pecking order before the year is out ...AlexMiller72https://www.blogger.com/profile/04342817979573894992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010475850020053525.post-17383323839297916712016-10-01T09:47:37.800-05:002016-10-01T09:47:37.800-05:00Yay! Bird Boy vs. Moneymaker and Valet. He's o...Yay! Bird Boy vs. Moneymaker and Valet. He's obviously been taught well by Cody, but not well enough to get rid of his arrogance. If he hadn't delayed Cody, and this had been a strict 1 on 1 match, he might have won. Of course, it's always hard to tell if he actually wanted to win by himself or saw an opportunity to get dominated by another hot guy.<br /><br />The surprise character in this story for me was the Valet. Taking hits for his master, acting as a distraction, and totally enjoying his revenge on Bird Boy. BB's disappointment/shock/humiliation at being fucked by the little guy, not Moneymaker, was a nice touch.<br /><br />Moneymaker smirks into my camera, "And that's two falls. It's over. New name. New costume. Same old sorry ass Spartan. What a fucking loser." <br /><br />Hell yes!<br /><br />Cody is such a narcissist, but not an idiot. He saw through Bird Boy's little trick so easily. He instantly realized Bird Boy would try to use the opportunity to take out all three of them and come out on top.<br /><br />I know you said you've got to leave the reader wanting more, but damn, I would have loved to get a peek at Xaq's next training/punishment session. I can't imagine Cody going easy on him after that stunt. :)Mikehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17556213978277211613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010475850020053525.post-40523437328903466872016-10-01T09:19:30.908-05:002016-10-01T09:19:30.908-05:00Wishes DO come true! I've been wanting to see ...Wishes DO come true! I've been wanting to see Xaq/Spartan/Bird Boy go up against someone as equally strong and ripped for quite some time, and Moneymaker was my first choice! A test of strength, bearhugs, shoulder blocks that have no effect -- all in the first 5 minutes of the match! I love how X/S/BB has become an expert at the bearhug and added that move to his repertoire -- if anyone is strong enough and solid enough to apply that hold properly, it's him! It was also good to see his already dynamic character developed even more. It's been quite the journey for Xaq, and I'm definitely along for the ride!<br /><br />Great writing as usual! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com