tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010475850020053525.post7925328073075162282..comments2024-03-23T09:22:57.541-05:00Comments on The Cave: The Cave Unleashed 8: Beau vs. KeithAlexMiller72http://www.blogger.com/profile/04342817979573894992noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010475850020053525.post-63406576381115254442021-04-19T08:03:31.738-05:002021-04-19T08:03:31.738-05:00That sounds great! As a reader, I often dream up s...That sounds great! As a reader, I often dream up sequels or changes to my favorite stories, so I wholeheartedly encourage it. Sometimes I write them down. Sometimes I just keep them in my head. But I always have fun doing it.AlexMiller72https://www.blogger.com/profile/04342817979573894992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010475850020053525.post-5176436139120004112021-04-18T21:40:29.374-05:002021-04-18T21:40:29.374-05:00I really hope one day Keith realized Toby lied to ...I really hope one day Keith realized Toby lied to him, I love seeing Beau jobbing but I hate seeing the heel legitimately dislike him lmao, I think I'll write a fanfic of my own where Keith realizes they were both manipulated and decides to have a more lighthearted match with Beau (still dominating Beau of course ;) but without Toby's manipulation involved)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010475850020053525.post-83852082084995354252019-01-07T18:28:33.290-06:002019-01-07T18:28:33.290-06:00Thanks! Appreciate you taking time to comment.Thanks! Appreciate you taking time to comment.AlexMiller72https://www.blogger.com/profile/04342817979573894992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010475850020053525.post-20707564267653668872019-01-07T11:53:31.927-06:002019-01-07T11:53:31.927-06:00Most excellent! Jobber Beau for life!!Most excellent! Jobber Beau for life!!mriderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848484902597748004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010475850020053525.post-36543241165999767942019-01-02T19:12:42.102-06:002019-01-02T19:12:42.102-06:00Wow, thanks. It’s amazing to read so many comments...Wow, thanks. It’s amazing to read so many comments like this at this point in the blog. I love your take on Beau. :)AlexMiller72https://www.blogger.com/profile/04342817979573894992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010475850020053525.post-29361921034288852702019-01-02T19:07:41.231-06:002019-01-02T19:07:41.231-06:00Thanks, I appreciate that. It’s the characters tha...Thanks, I appreciate that. It’s the characters that keep things going.<br /><br />There are plans for Beau, but I don’t anticipate a rematch with Keith. The man meant it when he said he’s done with the boy. However, while I think Keith has proven all he needs to prove, Beau has a lot to consider.AlexMiller72https://www.blogger.com/profile/04342817979573894992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010475850020053525.post-22648218537798244172019-01-02T18:31:37.143-06:002019-01-02T18:31:37.143-06:00Everyone has their own tastes, but I think this is...Everyone has their own tastes, but I think this is the hottest story you've ever told. To me, Beau is boring as a victor but the ultimate hot muscle boy getting owned - all stud and alpha in that way that so when he ends up a magnificent trophy fuck the conquest is even hotter. I hope he is beaten and used often in the future - you know how to make him someone to be had without ever consciously knowing how his body makes him such a target. Never a jobber but always someone who needs to be put in his place.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010475850020053525.post-82695069308065569962019-01-02T16:52:29.596-06:002019-01-02T16:52:29.596-06:00Alex, you are an excellent developer of characters...Alex, you are an excellent developer of characters. I hope there is a story arc for Beau. Maybe that arc could lead to a pro match vs Keith at the cave. <br /><br />This could lead to the introduction of new characters who Beau mets up with during his journey, maybe Beau jobs to a smaller Patrick LeBlanc looking character, <br /><br />Anyway, you do a great job and develop your characters very well.guillyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09469159854195226546noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010475850020053525.post-22239260883512811972019-01-02T14:28:36.232-06:002019-01-02T14:28:36.232-06:00Thanks Tom. I’m glad you liked it. Older guys do p...Thanks Tom. I’m glad you liked it. Older guys do pretty well in The Cave universe, so maybe that’s some, ahem, older dude bias on my part. ;)AlexMiller72https://www.blogger.com/profile/04342817979573894992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010475850020053525.post-14509988162261619972019-01-02T14:25:33.734-06:002019-01-02T14:25:33.734-06:00Thanks, Axel. I knew Beau was going to lose, but ...Thanks, Axel. I knew Beau was going to lose, but the ‘how’ changed a lot. Originally it was one really long fall, an iron man match, but when I hit the triangle choke, my fingers typed TAP and everything changed.<br /><br />Beau has four whole weeks to do something, but no spoilers here. You’ll have to wait to see what, with whom and how it plays out. :)AlexMiller72https://www.blogger.com/profile/04342817979573894992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010475850020053525.post-27524183164275432912019-01-02T12:17:41.725-06:002019-01-02T12:17:41.725-06:00Btw, I think that at this point we have to have a ...Btw, I think that at this point we have to have a group conversation on the Official top three or perhaps top five stories. Lol. Perhaps a poll or perhaps submissions. Something! HahaFricks Sexy Pickshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16553340410459316728noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010475850020053525.post-71530848377563221072019-01-02T11:54:03.387-06:002019-01-02T11:54:03.387-06:00Hahahaha. No they can’t!!!! Toby is very mischievo...Hahahaha. No they can’t!!!! Toby is very mischievous! Fricks Sexy Pickshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16553340410459316728noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010475850020053525.post-77956095716872512282019-01-02T11:51:58.271-06:002019-01-02T11:51:58.271-06:00Haha! Coming into this story I was 80% sure that B...Haha! Coming into this story I was 80% sure that Beau was going to win and get his pride back but damn was I wrong! Not only once but 4 times! Even without the leg injury Keith was able to take him down. Looks like that man is a monster all on his own which is crazy impressive with how strong Beau is. I'm curious to see were Beau goes with his vacation. I agree with everyone else that I want to see him come back with wins under his belt... but I cant lie in wanting to see him job a bit more!Axelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06087156092479836061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010475850020053525.post-38604749669862565632019-01-02T06:56:18.573-06:002019-01-02T06:56:18.573-06:00Can't say it any better than Sean did (which i...Can't say it any better than Sean did (which is why I waited for him to opine :-) ). He nailed it and perfectly summed up my feelings. And as an, ahem, older dude it's always kind of nice seeing an older wrestler dominate a young buck. ;-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010475850020053525.post-55106450228299204772019-01-02T06:32:12.139-06:002019-01-02T06:32:12.139-06:00Some people just can’t help themselves, can they?Some people just can’t help themselves, can they?AlexMiller72https://www.blogger.com/profile/04342817979573894992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010475850020053525.post-85118609875215626042019-01-02T06:31:45.936-06:002019-01-02T06:31:45.936-06:00Thanks! I’ll take perfect. :)
Toby is up there w...Thanks! I’ll take perfect. :) <br /><br />Toby is up there with Xaq as the most unreliable of all my unreliable narrators, which is always fun.AlexMiller72https://www.blogger.com/profile/04342817979573894992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010475850020053525.post-12099091026604237602019-01-02T06:27:13.908-06:002019-01-02T06:27:13.908-06:00Wow, that’s great. I’m glad you loved it so much. ...Wow, that’s great. I’m glad you loved it so much. And you’re right, this isn’t over. Keith vs. Beau is over and Keith won, but there’s more to come in the story.AlexMiller72https://www.blogger.com/profile/04342817979573894992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010475850020053525.post-68070571540778944722019-01-02T02:37:48.734-06:002019-01-02T02:37:48.734-06:00P.S. Experience over strength.
Most intriguing l...P.S. Experience over strength.<br /><br />Most intriguing line: "As we hug, I suddenly wonder, who could beat Keith? I wonder."Sean Pfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17042772814641445217noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010475850020053525.post-78373279719324012632019-01-02T02:28:38.957-06:002019-01-02T02:28:38.957-06:00I'm fine with Beau dominating in the Cave, but...I'm fine with Beau dominating in the Cave, but I just hope he never, ever beats Keith, because this was all so surprising, and so PERFECT. (I personally love jobber-Beau.) And any "revenge" on Keith would be totally unsatisfactory, since he was also just getting played by Toby--but fortunately, level-headed Beau seems to have figured that out already. Oh, for Toby to betray himself, and Keith and Beau to finally understand each other...!<br /><br />And Beau getting sleepered out TWICE? Thank you for that. Beau getting sleepered out is a few of my favorite things. :)<br /><br />And psychopath Toby's P.O.V. is so fun.Sean Pfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17042772814641445217noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010475850020053525.post-65637783621935170842019-01-02T02:05:57.362-06:002019-01-02T02:05:57.362-06:00This has to be a top three in All Cave stories. Th...This has to be a top three in All Cave stories. This is “the closure” of a long running series of stories between Toby and Beau. And what a mega story. This story was so well written and executed. Was it shocking? Hell yeah. Every single “challenge” you expected Beau to win. But no. He got beat fair and square in every single one. And he had to give more than once! Plus being out out. Thing is I must imagine The way Keith treated Beau in the job. It couldn’t be fun. <br />This story has layers and consequences. It’s not over yet. And I’m so open minded to wherever it takes your imagination. Because this story is just good. Keith is a damn superstar. And Toby is one heck of a narrator. Those two characters have some real depth to them. They have particular ways of thinking whether you agree with them or not. They are legit in their arguments. I think the schism between the brothers feels real. And again Keith is brilliant. He kicks the Blonde hunk out of the house in a way. <br />But what makes the story is that all three men have opinions of what’s happening. Maybe it’s time for Caveys for stories. Cause this story needs an award! Fricks Sexy Pickshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16553340410459316728noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010475850020053525.post-46208135791381616892019-01-01T21:18:00.177-06:002019-01-01T21:18:00.177-06:00Thanks! Definitely tried to do a lot here, so I ap...Thanks! Definitely tried to do a lot here, so I appreciate that it came through. Beau’s journey continues this year, so no comment on any impact, short- or long-term.AlexMiller72https://www.blogger.com/profile/04342817979573894992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010475850020053525.post-50470085291489870342019-01-01T16:30:58.458-06:002019-01-01T16:30:58.458-06:00I certainly didn't see this scenario playing o...I certainly didn't see this scenario playing out the way it did -- although it did solve a major dilemma I've been facing in my own fan fiction project! <br /><br />I agree with Phil's last comments above. I hope there are no long-term effects on poor Beau's psyche and that Nuke Man will be back to dominate The Cave soon in an even more revealing trunks to replace the pair he lost! Perhaps unleashing the full power of Nuke Man on Cave opponents is just what he needs to vent his anger and frustrations. :)<br /><br />This was by far your most emotionally complex story to date, Alex. It's amazing how your work continues to evolve. Great job!!!<br /><br />-JSAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010475850020053525.post-61752508679216828362019-01-01T16:27:47.943-06:002019-01-01T16:27:47.943-06:00Thanks for the comment. Well, as long as Keith doe...Thanks for the comment. Well, as long as Keith doesn't travel to The Cave, Beau can still dominate. ;)AlexMiller72https://www.blogger.com/profile/04342817979573894992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010475850020053525.post-60583694353014650172019-01-01T16:01:44.092-06:002019-01-01T16:01:44.092-06:00DAMN!!! I thought for sure Beau was gonna get at l...DAMN!!! I thought for sure Beau was gonna get at least one win here! Incredible to see him dominated in such a way. Keith is such a stud, a bit misguided, but fuch it's been hot watching him own Beau. Hope this doesn't turn Beau into a jobber for life. Still love watching Nuke man dominate in the CavePhilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07252704484608420840noreply@blogger.com