What's coming up for August? Click and find out. Warning, though ... there be spoilers past the cut.
First up, let me say that my plan for August has changed from what I said in the July preview. I planned to post three "Reunion" stories this month, but I've decided that I'll post two on my regular schedule of the 1st and 15th. I think this is the wrong time to accelerate posting. I'm looking at making some changes in how I write these stories. 177 stories has been a lot for me to write, but I realize that it's also been a lot for you to read. Perhaps too much.
In the short-term, I plan to keep up my twice-monthly schedule, so don't worry about that. It's more of a narrative reset. Immediately, I'm considering adjusting my writing to reduce story length and complexity. Characters are key, but pages of exposition and setup are not. The ratio of story to action may be out of whack. We'll see how it goes, but any stylistic changes won't happen until November at the earliest.
Anyway, on to August, which still feature a lot of story ...
8/1/19: Encounters: The Wedding Crash
First up, let me say that my plan for August has changed from what I said in the July preview. I planned to post three "Reunion" stories this month, but I've decided that I'll post two on my regular schedule of the 1st and 15th. I think this is the wrong time to accelerate posting. I'm looking at making some changes in how I write these stories. 177 stories has been a lot for me to write, but I realize that it's also been a lot for you to read. Perhaps too much.
In the short-term, I plan to keep up my twice-monthly schedule, so don't worry about that. It's more of a narrative reset. Immediately, I'm considering adjusting my writing to reduce story length and complexity. Characters are key, but pages of exposition and setup are not. The ratio of story to action may be out of whack. We'll see how it goes, but any stylistic changes won't happen until November at the earliest.
Anyway, on to August, which still feature a lot of story ...
8/1/19: Encounters: The Wedding Crash
Quinn, Trevor, Jeremy. |
Hotel Wellington. Kansas City MO. Private Dining Room.
“And so, please rise and join me in toasting Mark and Todd.” We rise and raise our glasses, grateful that the longest and most boring toast in history is done. It wasn’t funny. It wasn’t heart-warming. It wasn’t anything but a rambling mess. At least it’s over. Or not. Brad keeps talking. “I know you two will … blah, blah blah.”
Some of the older folks in the room actually have to lower their arms as the ‘best man’ rambles on for another three minutes before finally letting us clink glasses. CLINK! Everyone starts to mingle as the busboys finally get a chance to clear the plates and refill water glasses. I sit back down at my place and immediately feel Trevor’s hot breath on my ear.
Trevor whispers, “Oh my god, Quinn. That. Was. Exhausting.” I just nod with a smile, not wanting anyone to think this is anything more than idle small talk. He's Mark’s groomsman #4 and I'm #5 in this overly elaborate wedding, so I don’t want to be rude in front of friends and family. He sighs, “And this is just the rehearsal dinner. Wait until he gives his full speech tomorrow. Fuck it. I’m going on my phone as soon as he starts.”
I whisper with a smile, “Be nice.”
Trevor rolls his eyes and takes another big swig of complimentary top-shelf scotch. He whispers, “That’s the problem with this world. Everyone is so busy being nice that idiots like Brad go though life not knowing that they’re idiots and us non-idiots suffer for it.”
I smoothly reach under the table and squeeze his leg to calm him down. Still thick and strong, just like I remember. He grabs my wrist and shifts my hand onto his bulge. Thank god for long white tablecloths. I rub it gently. Still huge, just like I remember. I can't take it any more, giving him a look, “Have we done our duty?” He gives me a smirk and nod.
As I rise, I casually say for anyone who might be eavesdropping, “I'm headed to the bar. Do you want anything?”
Trevor replies, “Just give me a second to finish this and I’ll join you.”
I smirk as he dramatically drains his already empty glass. I know he's really just letting his cock settle down before he stands up in front of a room of our friends and their family. His too tight dress pants can’t really hide his magnificent meat when it’s soft, never mind now that I’ve got him horned up. I can’t wait to get him on the mattress, wrestling and fucking until dawn.
Todd’s brother and best man, Jeremy, overhears and stands up like he’s joining us. Fuck. Trevor told me they hooked up at the Vegas bachelor weekend, which I had to miss. No surprise, since my buddy is an incredibly good looking muscleman and Jeremy is a hot young blond muscle boy. But what happened in Vegas needed to stay in Vegas. It’s over, kid.
I want to say he's not invited, but Trevor waves him over. When my buddy rises, he puts his arm over this intruder’s shoulder, guiding him forward. What the fuck? I'm not interested in some cocky kid who’s all body and no brains. This is supposed to be our annual hookup and I have something really important to tell my buddy.
We pass the bar, heading directly to the elevators. As we wait for the doors to open, I give Trevor a questioning look, but he not-so-subtly points at Jeremy's ass and winks. I get it. The guy’s pants are stretched tight over his plump round butt. Yeah, he does squats. Good for him. He's also 19, dumb as a bag of rocks, and interfering with my plans.
8/15/19: Encounters: The High School Reunion
The narrator, Mr. Maxon |
“You have won.”
My large manicured hands run over my sculpted and perfectly-trimmed torso as I watch in the bathroom mirror. I turn my remarkably handsome face to admire my professionally-groomed stubble, $300 messy haircut and flawless tanned skin. It costs a lot to look this chill, but I’ve got it and I’m worth it.
“You’re a genius. You’re gorgeous. You’re a fucking billionaire.”
Yes, I am all of those things, but it never hurts to remind oneself. Especially on a night as important as this one. My return to the scene of the crimes against me. My triumphant return. I fluff under my hefty manhood. I've fucked royalty, pro athletes and the hottest celebrities in Hollywood but none of that will be as satisfying as revenge fucking Mr. Maxon.
I stare into the bathroom mirror, caressing my body and ego. My cock grows hard as I think about tonight. In every way possible, I’m better than every single person in this dump, which is the only decent hotel in my home town. Decent? Yeah, right. God, everything sucks. I can’t believe I grew up here. I’m like the only rose that grew up in this dystopian hell.
“I’ve won at life. They’ve lost. Time to make sure they never forget it.”
Okay, I’m ready. I shrug the robe off my broad shoulders to the unheated fake stone floor. So cheap. I flex my sculpted peaks then look down past my massive pecs at my tree trunk legs. It’s a body built with the best trainers in the world. It’s almost a shame to cover it with clothes, but I guess I have to. As I move to the closet, I glance at the invitation on the nightstand.
St. Anthony’s High School. Class of 2009. The Fighting Cardinals. An all-boys school that claimed to make men. All-assholes is more like it. A living hell for a brilliant but physically frail teen like I was. Shunned for my genius, I lacked the ability to fight back with anything but my wicked wit. I could out-sarcasm any of them, but they were usually too stupid to understand my references. God, I still hate these people for what they put me through.
I cross my suite’s living room confidently. I squat down to run my fingers on the black wrestling mat with a smile. When you have money, hotels will do anything for you. Including moving furniture and laying this down. They never ask why. They just add it to the bill. I know why. My very special revenge. I will do what I came to do and then head home. On my private jet.
As I enter the lobby, I think about how many of these guys have been on my dating platform. 38%. Yes, I checked. And that includes teachers. It includes Mr. Maxon. My former gym teacher and the biggest bully at St. Anthony’s. My biggest bully, for sure. How he fucking tortured me. Maxon was just 28 in my freshman year, but he was already pure evil. And I had to endure his cruel torture every year. Somehow, he always ended up teaching my gym class. I was sure he just hunted me down for the sport of it. Now, I’m the one hunting him.
Happy August, guys.
Alex
Alex
Definitely not too much for me to read. I always look forward to your work, and August looks no different. Two excellent tropes. Although I'm really hoping the Coach wins in the second story. ��
ReplyDeleteI’m hoping they’re situations folks can relate to.
DeleteAnd I guess you’re a fast reader! :)
Both stories seem to be very interesting.
ReplyDeleteBut what caught my attention the most, and what makes it a great read is those two first paragraphs. Some interesting news. So you will have a different narrating style starting in November? I can say that it sounds exciting.
I think its that the summer season people get busy. Its been my case although Im back at the blog and of course sharing work with others. So I assume that less people are online as well.
But I think long stories do have a place though. I think in regards to amount of reading, I don't think its too much material. Most of your stories are limited in length. Personally its good to have long stories from time to time. The Cave Novel was a treat for those of us that have been since day one and its greatly appreciated. And at least from me, I can say that I have never felt that you post too many stories! LOL. Im pretty sure that Im not the only one that feels like that. I think it is the only blog with a continuous story line out there. Perhaps you took a break from that continuity to tell us different stories and as a reader I respect that and like that.
My writing isn’t changing, the approach to stories is. Think more Him vs.Thor - simple setup, get to the wrestling faster - rather than what’s being posted this summer. I tend to obsess on details and providing some kind of logic for things that is likely unnecessary.
DeleteHad to come back and reread the next preview after reading today's story. I'm with that other guy and I'm crossing my fingers that the Main Guy gets a reality check from his old coach! The cocky young boys who are full of it need to get a quick ego check right?! Hopefully? Haha looking forward to it!
ReplyDeleteLOL. You guys want the poor bullied kid to lose to the mean old coach? Just two more weeks!
DeleteFrom the preview thought it doesn't seem like he's poor, bullied or a kid anymore haha. I think he just needs a little attitude adjustment from the coach with a loss to him and to get level headed so he can lose realize he's become what he has hated and boom. Happy ending for everyone :P.
DeleteI'm a fan of your writing :) I came in late, and sometimes I will click something unfamiliar and I realize I'd read it previously but this time I had more context or details that you only get from reading a bunch of other stories, which made reading more enjoyable. I don't think there is a "too much" point, haha.
ReplyDeleteSo much awesomeness when someone new joins and comments. This blog is a freaking story gold mine!
DeleteThanks! I appreciate reading your comment. There’s a big back catalogue for folks who want to read more ... 178 stories and counting!
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